Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Tuesday's report

Title: Keep Faith
New pages 2 1/2
Total pages 10 1/2
Page goal 280
Evan: being devilish flirtly
Mars (Mary): falling easily
Will: not in the story yet
A sample:
He stopped once he reached the door. He turned to notice I haven't followed him. "Coming?" he asked.I jumped into movement to follow. "Now?" I stupidly asked.
He grinned "I don't think our guest can wait all day." he answered.

This so sound like a teen story. I don't know if that a good thing or a bad thing. It's the first draft... repeat to self it's the first draft. Close my eyes repeating the words over and over again. The first draft is allowed to seriously suck!

1 comment:

  1. Quoted from someone: You can't fix a blank page. Great job.

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